Sunday, February 7, 2010

Resume Draft #1




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  1. sorry for inconvenience. By clicking it, you can see bigger image

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  2. Hey, here's a couple of suggestions:

    1. Under education, "2003- " seems a little incomplete. Maybe you could say 2003-Present or 2003- 2012?

    2. Under your IRAC internship, you have not bloded any phrase, as you did in the previous 2 internships. You may want to do so, because you did learn something, right? That's why you included it in your resume right?

    3. The company name and location (cities) need to be differentiated. Both are in bold, but maybe only italice one? This way it'll be easier to differentiate?

    4. I was wondering about the your choice of ordering for your work experience. I was wondering why you did not insert the job title before the company name? An Assit. Designer does sound like a fancy title to me. Soemthing worth highlighting. Atleast bold or italice it so that it would grab the reader's eye.

    That's it for now =)

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